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Heavy NP Shift and Extraposition

When the subject is a whole clause (that, whether, wh-, infinitive, or -ing), English usually moves it to the end and places dummy it at the beginning: it is clear that …, it would be unwise to …. This rule teaches you how to build such sentences, choose between them and an initial clause, and distinguish them from clefts and ordinary it.

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Subject-clause extraposition: dummy it and the clause at the end

Dummy it and the clause at the end

When the subject is a whole clause (a that-clause, a whether- or wh-clause, an infinitive, or an -ing form), English usually moves it to the end of the sentence and places dummy it at the beginning. Here, it does not refer to anything: it only occupies the subject position before the predicate.

In traditional explanations, the clause at the end is called the notional subject. It occupies the grammatical subject position of the main clause: is/was agrees with it, and the tag question repeats it. The content of the final clause is what is evaluated.

This structure is the neutral word order: a short evaluation comes first, while long, new information comes at the end. This is called the principle of end weight.

How to build it

It + predicate (+ complement) + subject clause

subject / S
—
The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
clause
—
A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.
complement
—
A part completing the meaning: in I am happy, happy describes my state.

It is a shame that the library closes so early.

It is a shame that the library closes so early.

The evaluation a shame comes before the clause; it does not refer to anything in the text.

It would help to know who made the decision.

It would help to know who made the decision.

The notional subject is the infinitive clause to know who made the decision.

It struck her that the room had gone silent.

It struck her that the room had gone silent.

After a verb with the object her, the notional subject is a that-clause.

Four types of subject clauses

A that-clause gives the content of a statement. It does not guarantee that this content is a fact: it seems likely that… expresses probability. In many patterns, that can be omitted; before a long clause, it is often retained for clarity.

A whether-clause and wh-clauses (who, what, why, how) express a question or a choice: it is not obvious why … In these clauses, word order is direct, as in a statement, without an auxiliary verb before the subject.

An infinitive clause shows an action: it is hard to find the entrance. If the action has its own performer, for introduces them: it is hard for newcomers to find the entrance.

An -ing clause after it is possible only after a limited range of evaluative expressions: it's no use, it's worth, it's pointless, it was great, it's a pleasure, it's a waste of time.

It seems likely that prices will keep rising.

It seems likely that prices will keep rising.

The that-clause gives a prediction, while seems likely presents it as probable, not as an established fact.

It is not obvious why the system crashed.

It is not obvious why the system crashed.

A wh-clause with direct word order: why the system crashed.

It is hard for newcomers to find the entrance.

It is hard for newcomers to find the entrance.

For introduces the performer of the infinitive clause.

It was great meeting your parents.

It was great meeting your parents.

An -ing clause after the evaluative expression it was great.

Which predicates lead to it

Adjectives of evaluation and probability: clear, likely, essential, odd, doubtful, regrettable. Noun-based evaluations: a pity, a shame, no wonder, a mistake, a good idea.

Verbs expressing feelings take an object me/him/everyone: it surprised me, it bothers them, it puzzled everyone. Verbs such as occur and suggest introduce the person with a preposition: it occurred to me, it was suggested to us.

The impersonal passive can present information without naming its source: it is said, it has been argued, it was agreed. The source then needs to be established from context. Seem, appear, happen, turn out, and follow also have it-constructions, but in other patterns they are used with other subjects: she seems tired.

The expressions take and cost work for an action and its cost: it takes time to learn a language, it cost them a fortune to repair the roof.

It is doubtful that the bridge will reopen before spring.

It is doubtful that the bridge will reopen before spring.

The adjective of probability doubtful evaluates the clause.

It bothers them that nobody apologised.

It bothers them that nobody apologised.

A feeling verb with the object them.

It has been argued that the reform came too late.

It has been argued that the reform came too late.

The impersonal passive hides the agent.

It cost them a fortune to repair the roof.

It cost them a fortune to repair the roof.

Cost with an object and an infinitive clause.

When extraposition is obligatory

In the patterns it seems/appears/happens/turns out that…, you cannot simply move the that-clause before the bare verb. Compare: It seems that the plan failed. If an evaluation follows seem, an initial clause is possible: That the plan failed seems unlikely. Focus on the whole construction, not on the name of the verb.

If the sentence already contains dummy it, the clause must go at the end: it that … is impossible in the subject position.

In questions, an initial clause is rarely used: Is it true that …? Does it matter whether …? A tag question also repeats it, not words from the clause.

It appears that the data were incomplete.

It appears that the data were incomplete.

In the pattern it appears that…, it is required; simply moving the that-clause before bare appears does not produce a valid sentence.

Does it matter whether the form is signed in ink?

Does it matter whether the form is signed in ink?

A question with it and a whether-clause at the end.

It's remarkable that she remembered, isn't it?

It's remarkable that she remembered, isn't it?

The tag repeats the dummy subject it.

End weight, style, and initial clauses

Neutral, business, and academic writing prefer the it-variant because the long clause comes at the end and carries new information.

An initial subject clause is grammatical with many predicates, but it sounds heavy, formal, or rhetorical. It is appropriate when the clause repeats information that is already known, in aphorisms, and in deliberately elevated style.

An initial clause with if is not possible: if at the beginning is read as a conditional conjunction, so whether is needed.

To forgive is divine.

To forgive is divine.

An aphorism: an initial infinitive clause is appropriate.

That the evidence was weak was no secret to the defence.

That the evidence was weak was no secret to the defence.

The clause repeats information already known from the context.

Whether she meant it is another matter.

Whether she meant it is another matter.

An initial whether-clause is stylistically appropriate.

Clause form

No comma is used before that after it …: it is odd that nobody called. In this structure, a comma is often mistakenly carried over from languages that require a comma before subordinate clauses.

In wh- and whether-clauses, word order is direct: it is unclear what the speaker meant, not *what did the speaker mean. The verb itself expresses the past tense.

In these patterns, a person is introduced with to: it was suggested to the staff, it occurred to him. Occurred is an active form, while was suggested is passive; the preposition depends on the verb, not on a general requirement of all passives. In a to-infinitive, a separate performer can be introduced with for: it is essential for managers to stay neutral.

It is well known that sound travels faster in water than in air.

It is well known that sound travels faster in water than in air.

No comma before that.

It is not clear how the thieves got in.

It is not clear how the thieves got in.

Direct word order: how the thieves got in.

It was explained to us that the office had moved.

It was explained to us that the office had moved.

The person is introduced with the preposition to.

Boundaries: what is not subject-clause extraposition

A cleft sentence highlights an element: It was in May that the contract was signed. If you remove it was … that, a complete sentence with that element remains, not a subject clause.

Ordinary it refers to an object: I found the letter, and it was unopened. A clause that specifies a noun (A report appeared that the mayor would resign) is a separate construction (the postposition of a dependent clause from a noun phrase), as is the shifting of a long object to the end.

Constructions with it as an object (I find it odd that …) and a subject raised from a clause (She seems to have left) belong to separate topics, although they are easy to confuse with this one.

It was in May that the contract was signed.

It was in May that the contract was signed.

A cleft sentence: it highlights an adverbial of time, not a subject clause.

I found the letter, and it was unopened.

I found the letter, and it was unopened.

Ordinary it refers to letter.

A report appeared that the mayor would resign.

A report appeared that the mayor would resign.

The clause specifies the noun report; it is not the subject.

Using this in your own speech

For a neutral, complete sentence corresponding to “it is important that…” or “it is a pity that…”, use it is important that… / it is a pity that…. Shortened forms are possible in conversational fragments, but it is required in this complete pattern.

In academic and business writing, extraposition helps you express ideas cautiously: it is possible that, it has been suggested that, it remains to be seen whether.

In conversation, short it-utterances give an evaluation or reaction: it was fun working with you, it surprised me that the shop was shut. Create variety by combining clause types with ordinary sentences.

It is essential to keep the receipts.

It is essential to keep the receipts.

An impersonal sentence corresponds to it + an infinitive.

It remains to be seen whether the plan will work.

It remains to be seen whether the plan will work.

A typical cautious formula in academic writing.

It was good to hear from you.

It was good to hear from you.

A conversational evaluation with an infinitive clause.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:Is clear that the budget will be cut.

Correct:It is clear that the budget will be cut.

In this neutral, complete construction, the subject it is required: It is clear that…. Do not extend this conclusion to imperative sentences or conversational fragments, where the subject may be unspoken.

Incorrect:It is a shame, that he left early.

Correct:It is a shame that he left early.

No comma is used before that in this construction; adding one is an error often carried over from other languages' punctuation.

Incorrect:It is not known what did the surgeon decide.

Correct:It is not known what the surgeon decided.

This is a subordinate interrogative clause with direct word order: what the surgeon decided. It expresses unknown content but does not have the inversion of an independent question.

Incorrect:It occurred me that the key was missing.

Correct:It occurred to me that the key was missing.

The verb occur requires the preposition to before the person to whom something occurred.

Incorrect:This is important that we start early.

Correct:It is important that we start early.

This refers to a specific object, situation, or previously mentioned content; this construction requires formal it, which announces the that-clause.

Incorrect:It is a pity that he left, isn't he?

Correct:It is a pity that he left, isn't it?

The grammatical subject of the main clause is it, so the tag repeats it, not he from the clause.

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Extraposition from a noun phrase: a modifier separated from its noun

The intuition: the noun stays, the modifier moves right

A modifier normally sits next to its noun: A lecture that ran for three hours ended at midnight. In extraposition from a noun phrase, the head noun stays in place while the modifier moves to the end of the sentence: A lecture ended at midnight that had run for three hours.

The head and modifier remain semantically part of the same noun phrase, even though other words separate them in the sentence. The listener must therefore be able to identify effortlessly which noun the separated material belongs to.

The answer to “What moved?” is always: not the whole noun phrase, but only its dependent part. This distinguishes the construction from heavy noun phrase shift and from it-extraposition of a subject clause.

How to build it

head + [predicate / adverbials] + modifier

A ferry left the harbour that nobody had expected to sail.

A ferry left the harbour that nobody had expected to sail.

The relative clause that nobody had expected… refers to ferry, although left the harbour separates them.

Something happened last week that changed everything.

Something happened last week that changed everything.

The modifier is separated from the pronoun something and gives end focus to the most important part of the message.

A report was published yesterday that challenges the government's official position.

A report was published yesterday that challenges the government's official position.

The predicate was published yesterday is short, making the modifier easy to connect to report.

Which modifiers can be separated?

A relative clause with who, which, or that is most often separated. The same rearrangement is also possible with other postmodifying material: a prepositional phrase, a content that-clause with nouns such as news, rumour, idea, and claim, and comparative or result clauses associated with more, such, or so.

These modifiers share a position to the right of the head and consist of several words. A single short adjective normally placed before the noun does not move this way: A report was published yesterday controversial.

When the head is a content noun, such as a rumour, news, word, or an idea, a content that-clause can be separated as naturally as a relative clause. It supplies the noun's content rather than describing it.

In the pattern, relative clause means a clause modifying the noun; PP means prepositional phrase; that-clause here supplies the noun's content; than-clause expresses comparison; and result clause expresses a consequence. Vertical bars separate alternatives, not words that must be written.

How to build it

head + predicate + (relative clause | PP | that-clause | than-clause | result clause)

clause
—
A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.

A letter arrived yesterday that nobody could explain.

A letter arrived yesterday that nobody could explain.

The relative clause refers to letter; no intervening noun competes for the attachment.

A new exhibition has opened about medieval trade routes.

A new exhibition has opened about medieval trade routes.

The prepositional phrase about… is separated from exhibition by the short predicate has opened.

A rumour went round the office that the lift would be closed.

A rumour went round the office that the lift would be closed.

The content that-clause is separated from rumour and supplies its content rather than describing it.

More guests turned up than the caterers had planned for.

More guests turned up than the caterers had planned for.

The comparative than-clause is separated from more guests.

Such a crowd gathered outside that the police closed the street.

Such a crowd gathered outside that the police closed the street.

The result that-clause is separated from such a crowd.

Why use it? Weight, end focus, and a structural interruption

English favours placing long and important sentence elements at the end. A long modifier between subject and predicate creates centre embedding: the reader holds the subject in memory while waiting for the predicate.

Moving the modifier to the end removes this interruption and gives it end focus. Extraposition is therefore particularly natural in news, summaries, and academic writing where the most important content comes last.

Length is only one factor. A short modifier can also appear later: A man came in who I knew. A man I knew came in presents the information in a different order. Choose according to context and the desired emphasis, not a minimum word count.

A study that tracked a thousand tram passengers over eight years was released.

A study that tracked a thousand tram passengers over eight years was released.

The long modifier separates the subject from the predicate.

A study was released that tracked a thousand tram passengers over eight years.

A study was released that tracked a thousand tram passengers over eight years.

The information is the same, but the predicate immediately follows the subject and the long part receives end focus.

Which heads and predicates work well?

Extraposition is most natural with an indefinite phrase introducing a new participant or event: A man, Some people, Something, Several students. The predicate is often presentational: come, arrive, happen, appear, be published, take place.

Indefinite phrases are often useful for introducing new information, but definite phrases are also possible: The student arrived who had won the prize. Naturalness depends on context, stress, and how the relevant participant is identified. A content that-clause can also explain a definite noun: The news came that the bridge had collapsed.

Extraposition is not limited to subjects: I met a man yesterday who knew your father. Complements or adverbials then intervene between the head and modifier, and should be kept short.

Several climbers have arrived at the hut who had set off before dawn.

Several climbers have arrived at the hut who had set off before dawn.

An indefinite head and a motion predicate introduce new people.

I bought a jacket at the market that costs almost nothing.

I bought a jacket at the market that costs almost nothing.

This is extraposition from an object; the intervening phrase at the market is short.

The word went round the club that the lights would be switched off.

The word went round the club that the lights would be switched off.

A definite head is normal here because the that-clause supplies the noun's content rather than identifying its referent.

Limits: clarity, clause boundaries, and agreement

The first check is clarity. Another noun between the head and modifier can create a competing interpretation. Readers do not always choose the nearest noun: meaning, agreement, and context help. Nevertheless, avoid unnecessary ambiguity.

In clear teaching examples, the head and its modifier belong to the same clause. Do not mechanically move material beyond a long subordinate clause: in A man said that the bus had left who I had never met, the connection between who and man is hard to read. A safer version is A man who I had never met said that the bus had left. The limits of more complex syntactic cases are not determined solely by written distance.

The third limit is form. Separation does not change the modifier's relationship with its head: the relative clause's verb agrees with the head — A few visitors came who were late — and no resumptive pronoun is added, as in the incorrect that it challenges.

She said that a man had called who wanted to see the manager.

She said that a man had called who wanted to see the manager.

The head and modifier are within the same subordinate clause: extraposition does not cross its boundary.

A few swimmers have come ashore who were nearly exhausted.

A few swimmers have come ashore who were nearly exhausted.

The plural head swimmers requires were in the separated relative clause.

Distinguishing related constructions

In heavy NP shift, the entire phrase, including an object, moves to the end: She donated to the hospital all the books her aunt had left her. The whole phrase all the books… has moved right; the head has not stayed behind.

In it-extraposition of a subject clause, dummy it occupies subject position while the semantic subject, a clause, appears at the end: It is obvious that the lift is broken. An entire semantic subject clause is displaced, not a noun's modifier.

In the construction studied here, the noun head stays in place and its dependent modifier appears later. Check that the material actually specifies that noun: distance between a noun and following words is not sufficient evidence of extraposition.

She donated to the hospital all the books her aunt had left her.

She donated to the hospital all the books her aunt had left her.

The whole heavy phrase has shifted: all the books did not remain in place.

It is obvious that the lift is broken.

It is obvious that the lift is broken.

This is it-extraposition of a subject that-clause, not the separation of a modifier.

A teacher called who had met your brother.

A teacher called who had met your brother.

The head teacher stayed in place; only the relative clause was separated.

Register and use in communication

Extraposition occurs in both speech and writing, where its main function is to free the beginning of a sentence from a long modifier. In news, it helps name an event quickly and then develop the details.

Check modifier length, information focus, distance from the head, and possible ambiguity. If final position makes the sentence clearer, you can use it; this is a choice, not a mandatory step after satisfying a checklist.

Do not use extraposition in every sentence: a succession of such constructions can sound affected. It is a tool for a particular effect, not an obligatory rule.

A decision was reached late on Friday that will affect every tenant in the building.

A decision was reached late on Friday that will affect every tenant in the building.

This illustrates a written register: a short predicate frame and a longer explanation of the decision at the end.

A woman rang earlier who said she knew you.

A woman rang earlier who said she knew you.

This illustrates spoken register: the same structure with simpler vocabulary.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:A man arrived who I had never saw before.

Correct:A man arrived who I had never seen before.

After had in Past Perfect, use the past participle seen, not Past Simple saw. The separated who-clause describes man.

Incorrect:Two climbers reached the hut at dusk who was carrying a radio.

Correct:Two climbers reached the hut at dusk who were carrying a radio.

The verb in the separated relative clause agrees with the plural head climbers, not whichever noun happens to be nearest.

Incorrect:A booklet was printed last week that it criticises the council.

Correct:A booklet was printed last week that criticises the council.

That already functions as the relative clause's subject; it duplicates the subject and is unnecessary.

Incorrect:A report was published yesterday controversial.

Correct:A controversial report was published yesterday.

A single adjective normally placed before the noun cannot be separated this way: only postmodifying material with its own structure moves to the end in this pattern.

Incorrect:A letter arrived on Monday morning that nobody could explained.

Correct:A letter arrived on Monday morning that nobody could explain.

Could requires the base form explain without -ed. The that-clause describes letter.

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Heavy noun phrase shift

The intuition: short before long

English sentences tend to place heavier constituents towards the end. When two elements follow a verb, a shorter one often comes first and the longer one second. This principle is called end-weight.

A sentence is easier to process when the reader encounters short elements before a long, complex passage. A long direct object may therefore shift rightwards, past a short constituent.

How to build it

verb + SHORT constituent, such as to…, in… or on… + HEAVY object phrase

verb / V
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A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.
object / O
—
Who or what an action affects: in I read a book, a book is the object.

The nurse handed to the patient a folder containing every result from the past three years.

The nurse handed to the patient a folder containing every result from the past three years.

The short phrase to the patient immediately follows the verb, while the long description of the folder comes last.

They carried into the hall a table made from a single piece of oak that had fallen in a storm.

They carried into the hall a table made from a single piece of oak that had fallen in a storm.

The long description of the table, including a relative clause, comes at the end.

The nurse handed it to the patient.

The nurse handed it to the patient.

Here the object is a pronoun. It is not heavy, so it immediately follows the verb.

The form: what actually moves

The whole direct object phrase shifts. The verb stays in place, while a shorter constituent, such as a prepositional phrase or an expression of place or time, comes between the verb and the object.

Typical short constituents include to the board, in the margin, on the table and with the letter, as well as a short adverb such as upstairs. Weight involves complexity as well as length: a relative clause, a list or long modifiers can make a phrase heavy.

How to build it

subject + verb + short constituent + long object phrase

subject / S
—
The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
verb / V
—
A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.
object / O
—
Who or what an action affects: in I read a book, a book is the object.

The company sold to a small family firm the factory that it had owned since the 1950s.

The company sold to a small family firm the factory that it had owned since the 1950s.

The recipient phrase with to is relatively short, while the object contains a relative clause.

He wrote in the margin a comment that nobody could read.

He wrote in the margin a comment that nobody could read.

The short place phrase in the margin comes first.

Our guide pointed out to the group every building that had survived the fire.

Our guide pointed out to the group every building that had survived the fire.

The phrasal verb pointed out stays together. To the group precedes the long object.

Weight is relative, and the shift is optional

Weight is relative: the object’s length and complexity are compared with the other constituent. Short unstressed objects usually remain beside the verb. Order also depends on information focus and context, not just word count.

The unshifted order remains grammatical even with a long object. Shifting is a way to improve processing. There is no fixed length threshold, and reading a borderline sentence aloud can help you judge its balance.

She passed the note to the woman who was sitting at the back of the room.

She passed the note to the woman who was sitting at the back of the room.

The recipient phrase is heavier here, so it comes last, while the object immediately follows the verb.

He lent his bike to Omar.

He lent his bike to Omar.

Both constituents are short, so no shift is needed.

I explained to my parents why the flight had been delayed for six hours and what the airline had offered us.

I explained to my parents why the flight had been delayed for six hours and what the airline had offered us.

A long clausal complement is normally placed at the end after the short recipient phrase.

Limits: pronouns, short phrases and verb particles

An ordinary unstressed pronoun has very little weight, so it follows the verb directly: sent it to Max, not sent to Max it. Short noun phrases likewise normally do not need a shift.

With separable transitive phrasal verbs, an unstressed pronoun goes between the verb and particle: wrote it down. A short noun phrase can go on either side of the particle, while a long phrase usually follows it: wrote down every address that…. This does not apply to inseparable combinations such as look after.

I found them in the cupboard.

I found them in the cupboard.

The pronoun follows the verb, and the phrase with in comes next.

She wrote it down.

She wrote it down.

With a pronoun object, the particle follows the pronoun.

She wrote down every address that the driver had mentioned during the trip.

She wrote down every address that the driver had mentioned during the trip.

The long phrase follows the particle.

He took his coat off.

He took his coat off.

A short noun phrase can also go before the particle.

Two patterns for giving: a to-phrase and double objects

Many verbs allow both gave Sam the book and gave the book to Sam. When the direct object is long, the double-object construction already places it last, so no shift is needed.

With the to-pattern, the long object can follow the to-phrase: gave to Sam the book that…. Do not automatically transfer the double-object construction to other verbs. Standard patterns taught here include explain something to someone, suggest something to someone and donate something to an organisation.

The bank lent the couple enough money to buy the cottage and repair the barn.

The bank lent the couple enough money to buy the cottage and repair the barn.

The double-object construction puts the long phrase last without a shift.

The bank lent to the couple enough money to buy the cottage and repair the barn.

The bank lent to the couple enough money to buy the cottage and repair the barn.

The same meaning with a shift: to the couple precedes the long phrase.

She suggested to the committee a plan that would cut costs by a third.

She suggested to the committee a plan that would cut costs by a third.

In this pattern with suggest, to introduces the recipient, and the long phrase follows it.

Focus, register and alternative strategies

The end of a sentence is often where the main new information appears, a principle called end-focus. Shifting frequently serves that purpose too: a short, familiar constituent appears earlier, while long, new information comes last.

The shift is especially familiar in written, formal and academic language. If a sentence becomes too heavy, split it into two, use a pronoun in the second sentence or recast it in the passive.

The report recommends to the council a set of measures that would reduce traffic in the old town.

The report recommends to the council a set of measures that would reduce traffic in the old town.

A formal report style, with long, new information at the end.

We have a problem. Three of the pumps that the contractor installed in May have already failed.

We have a problem. Three of the pumps that the contractor installed in May have already failed.

In conversation, long information is often given its own sentence.

The measures were proposed to the council by a working group that had spent two years studying traffic in the old town.

The measures were proposed to the council by a working group that had spent two years studying traffic in the old town.

The passive leaves the long description of the agent at the end, achieving end-weight without shifting an object.

The boundaries: what we are not practising here

Heavy noun phrase shift moves the WHOLE direct object rightwards past a shorter constituent. This distinguishes it from two related kinds of extraposition.

Subject-clause extraposition uses anticipatory it and places the clause later. Extraposition from a noun phrase separates only a postmodifier, such as a relative clause, from the rest of the phrase. Inversion after a place expression is another distinct construction.

It is clear that the plan will fail.

It is clear that the plan will fail.

Anticipatory it occupies the subject position and the clause appears later. Subject extraposition has its own rule.

A report appeared yesterday that criticised the plan.

A report appeared yesterday that criticised the plan.

Only the relative clause is separated from the noun phrase. This belongs to the rule on extraposition from a noun phrase.

Into the room walked a tall man.

Into the room walked a tall man.

This is locative inversion, not object shift.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:She sent to her brother it yesterday.

Correct:She sent it to her brother yesterday.

The ordinary pronoun object is not shifted to the end. It follows the verb directly.

Incorrect:He picked up it from the floor.

Correct:He picked it up from the floor.

A pronoun object of this separable phrasal verb goes between the verb and the particle.

Incorrect:The firm donated the school several computers.

Correct:The firm donated several computers to the school.

For the standard neutral pattern with donate, use donate something to someone. Do not transfer the double-object construction from give.

Incorrect:She described me the problems that had come up during the audit.

Correct:She described to me the problems that had come up during the audit.

Describe does not use this double-object pattern. To introduces the recipient, followed here by the long object phrase.

Incorrect:The firm explained the customers the new rules.

Correct:The firm explained the new rules to the customers.

Explain does not use this double-object pattern. Introduce the recipient with to.

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