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Garden Path Sentences and Ambiguity Resolution

A garden-path sentence is grammatical, but readers initially parse it incorrectly and have to reread it. This lesson teaches you to identify the word where the initial analysis breaks down, name the mechanism (a word belonging to two word classes, a reduced relative clause, a subordinate-clause boundary or omitted that), distinguish a temporary trap from global ambiguity, and avoid creating traps in your own writing.

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Structural ambiguity and parsing

1. Readers parse a sentence word by word

Readers do not wait until the end of a sentence to understand it: with each new word, they immediately construct the most plausible analysis. This usually works. But in some sentences, the most plausible opening turns out to be wrong, and only a later word reveals a different structure. Such a sentence is called a garden-path sentence: it leads the reader down the wrong path.

In a typical garden-path trap, the sentence is grammatical, but the usual initial parse must be revised. This second analysis is called reanalysis. The effect depends on the reader and context; it may coexist with another ambiguity.

Three skills therefore matter in this lesson: finding the word where the analysis breaks down, naming exactly what had to be restructured, and explaining how the sentence could be worded to prevent the reader from going wrong.

The horse raced past the barn fell.

The horse that was raced past the barn fell.

Initially, raced is read as the main verb; fell reveals that raced past the barn describes the horse ('that was raced'), and the main predicate is fell.

The cheese melted over the pasta burned.

The cheese that was melted over the pasta burned.

The mechanism is the same: melted is initially taken as the predicate, but the actual predicate is burned.

2. A word belonging to two word classes

Many English words can be nouns and verbs, or adjectives and nouns. After an article, readers take one word as an adjective and the next as a noun, because this is the most common structure. If the first word is actually a noun (often an adjective used as a noun: the old = 'old people') and the second is a verb, the analysis breaks down when the apparent noun phrase is left without a predicate.

In The old man the boats, old functions as the subject ('old people'), and man is the verb meaning 'staff or operate'. Similarly, in The complex houses married and single soldiers, complex is a noun ('a complex'), and houses is a verb meaning 'accommodates'.

The trap is stronger when the misleading combination is very familiar to the reader. Later words or an already established context may suggest a different analysis. Not every reader will necessarily make a mistake at the same point.

How to build it

article + word₁ + word₂ → adjective + noun; actual structure: word₁ = subject, word₂ = predicate

subject / S
—
The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
noun
—
A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.
adjective
—
A word describing what someone or something is like: happy, tired, interesting.

The old man the boats.

The old people operate the boats.

Old functions as the subject (an adjective used as a noun); man is a verb meaning 'staff'.

The complex houses married and single soldiers and their families.

The complex accommodates married and single soldiers and their families.

Complex is a noun; houses is a verb meaning 'accommodates'.

3. Main verb or reduced relative clause

A reduced relative clause is a relative clause with the relative word and a form of be removed: the horse that was raced past the barn → the horse raced past the barn. The participle and everything dependent on it remain.

The danger arises when the participle has the same form as the Past Simple (raced, promoted, sent, questioned). Readers see this form, take it as the main verb, and later find the real predicate apparently unnecessary.

The trap weakens when there is an early passive cue, such as a by-phrase, or when the participle cannot be a finite verb form (written, driven, seen). The noun is another factor: if it cannot perform the action (the letter sent), the mistaken reading is blocked immediately. These are tendencies, not laws.

How to build it

noun + participle (+ adverbial) + main predicate

noun
—
A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.

The tourist driven through the old town complained.

The tourist who was driven through the old town complained.

Driven cannot be a Past Simple form, so the reader immediately recognises a participle.

The letter sent to the wrong office arrived late.

The letter that was sent to the wrong office arrived late.

The meaning of letter makes the passive reading of sent much more natural; context and knowledge of the world help prevent it from being taken as the main predicate.

4. The boundary of an opening subordinate clause

After an initial subordinate clause with while, when, as, after or before, readers may attach words incorrectly. If its verb can take an object, they sometimes interpret the next noun phrase as that object, although it actually begins the main clause.

Writing offers a simple tool: the comma. A comma is generally needed after an opening subordinate clause, and where its absence causes misreading, it becomes almost essential. In speech, a pause performs this role.

While the nurse washed the patient slept.

While the nurse washed, the patient slept.

Without a comma, the patient is read as the object of washed; with a comma, it is the subject of the main clause.

After the waiter cleared the table was reset.

After the waiter cleared, the table was reset.

Cleared the table initially seems to complete the clause, leaving was reset without a subject.

5. Omitted that at an embedded-clause boundary

After many verbs, such as say, think, know and admit, the conjunction that can be omitted. The particular verb's pattern still matters: tell usually also needs an addressee. A risk arises when the next noun phrase can initially be taken as an object rather than the subject of a subordinate clause.

The risk is greatest after verbs that take both a direct object and an embedded clause (tell, show, promise, warn). With that omitted, the following material may look like one object or even two.

What to do: in writing, where the reader cannot ask for clarification, retain that when the next group of words could be taken as an object. Where the structure is clear, it can be omitted.

The pilot admitted the delay cost the airline a fortune.

The pilot admitted that the delay cost the airline a fortune.

Initially, admitted the delay is read as a complete clause; cost reveals the embedded clause.

6. A temporary trap versus global ambiguity

In a temporary trap, the initial analysis is wrong, and by the end of the sentence only one correct analysis remains. In global ambiguity, both analyses survive to the end, and context determines the choice. Both phenomena are structural: the words stay the same, but their organisation changes.

A typical global ambiguity is the sequence V-ing + noun: it can express an action involving the noun or a noun with a modifier. Hiring managers can be tricky can mean either 'the act of hiring managers can be difficult' or 'managers who hire people can be difficult'.

The difference is practical: a temporary trap slows reading, whereas global ambiguity threatens accurate understanding. The remedies differ too: the first is exposed by editing, the second by clarifying the intended meaning.

Hiring managers can be tricky.

Hiring managers can be difficult / managers who hire people can be difficult.

Two complete analyses: V-ing as an action and V-ing as a modifier.

7. When a trap causes harm and how to spot it

A trap is harmful when readers need to understand quickly and accurately: in instructions, contracts, headlines and letters to readers using another language. Rereading takes time and can sometimes lead to the wrong action.

A trap can be appropriate when its purpose is play or an effect: a riddle, a language puzzle or a literary text with an intentionally delayed resolution.

A practical checking technique is to read the sentence word by word and ask whether each new word fits the analysis you have already built. If not, you have found the point of breakdown, and that is what needs fixing.

When you restart the system updates itself.

When you restart, the system updates itself.

This is harmful in an instruction: restart the system is read as a complete action, leaving updates itself without a subject.

8. The lesson's limits and related topics

This lesson teaches you to understand and recognise structural traps. Attachment ambiguities (what a prepositional phrase or relative clause belongs to) are covered in a separate lesson on attachment ambiguity; the full range of ways to remove ambiguity is covered in the lesson on disambiguation strategies.

Here, you use only minimal changes (who was, a comma, that) to show exactly what the trap conceals. Choosing the best strategy from the full range is outside this lesson's scope.

This lesson also does not cover deeply embedded sentences that are difficult to process because of their depth rather than an incorrect initial analysis.

The nurse examined the child with a torch.

The nurse examined the child who had a torch / used a torch to examine the child.

This is attachment ambiguity, not a garden-path trap: context determines the right reading, and there is no initially mistaken parse.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:The old mans the boats.

Correct:The old man the boats.

The old is plural ('old people'), so the verb man does not take -s; mans is wrong because the subject is not a singular noun.

Incorrect:The complex house married and single soldiers and their families.

Correct:The complex houses married and single soldiers and their families.

In the intended reading, complex is singular, so the predicate takes the form houses. House breaks agreement here; the form house itself should not be treated as incapable of being a verb.

Incorrect:While the nurse washed the patient, slept.

Correct:While the nurse washed, the patient slept.

The comma comes after the apparent object rather than after the subordinate clause's verb, leaving the main clause without a subject; put the comma after washed.

Incorrect:The parcel that delivered to the wrong flat was returned.

Correct:The parcel that was delivered to the wrong flat was returned.

For the intended passive meaning 'the parcel that someone delivered', the full relative clause is that was delivered. The reduced version the parcel delivered… is also possible. The original that delivered creates a different, active structure and does not express the parcel's intended role.

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Attachment ambiguity: what does the modifier belong to?

1. A modifier and its attachment point

A modifier is a word or group of words that adds information to another element: a prepositional phrase, relative clause, adverb or -ing phrase. We can call the element it describes its attachment point. Usually the link is clear, but when two possible targets precede the modifier, the sentence may become ambiguous. This is attachment ambiguity.

The ambiguity is not itself a grammatical error: both structures can be well formed. The problem is that readers may not know which one the writer intended and may choose the wrong one. Finding both possible targets is therefore the first step in both reading and writing.

How to build it

action + object + modifier → does the modifier describe the action or the object?

object / O
—
Who or what an action affects: in I read a book, a book is the object.

The surveyor examined the roof with a thermal camera.

The surveyor examined the roof with a thermal camera.

The most natural reading makes the camera the instrument used for the examination. However, a camera could be installed on the roof, so the other reading is not logically impossible. Context determines its likelihood.

The agent called the owner of the flat with the garden.

The agent called the owner of the flat with the garden.

The phrase can describe the flat or its owner. Both readings are possible.

The tailor repaired the coat with the torn pocket.

The tailor repaired the coat with the torn pocket.

The torn pocket naturally describes the coat. Word meaning supports this interpretation, not a mechanical requirement to attach to the nearest noun.

2. Prepositional phrases: attachment to a verb or noun

Attachment to the higher verb phrase is called high attachment; attachment to an embedded noun phrase is low attachment. The choice depends on the verb, the phrase’s meaning, context and familiar patterns. The nearest noun does not automatically win.

Several prepositional phrases can create more possibilities, but not every phrase naturally combines with every noun. Check plausible interpretations rather than declaring any sequence of three phrases ambiguous.

V means verb, N means noun and PP means prepositional phrase, such as with a camera. The arrow represents two possible links, not a change in word order.

How to build it

V + N + PP → PP attached to V (high) or PP attached to N (low)

verb / V
—
A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.

She sent the invoice to the supplier in Turin.

She sent the invoice to the supplier in Turin.

The location can describe the supplier or the act of sending.

He stored the boxes of tiles in the garage on Tuesday.

He stored the boxes of tiles in the garage on Tuesday.

On Tuesday naturally gives the time of storage, and in the garage gives its location. The number of phrases alone does not create equally plausible readings such as a Tuesday belonging to the boxes.

The electrician fixed the panel with the label.

The electrician fixed the panel with the label.

The label may be on the panel or, less plausibly, an instrument used in fixing it. Most readers choose the panel reading, but context guides the interpretation.

3. Relative clauses: who, which, that and agreement

In an N1 of N2 phrase followed by a relative clause, there are two possible noun attachment points. N1 and N2 mean the first and second nouns. Check which can fit the description, considering both number and meaning.

When the relative word is the subject, the verb form can help: who works points to a singular antecedent, while who work points to a plural one. Who usually refers to people, which to things or organisations; that can refer to either. These are useful clues in these patterns. In another structure, the verb may agree with a separate subject within the relative clause.

How to build it

N1 of N2 + who / which / that + verb → attachment to N1 or N2?

verb / V
—
A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.

The cousin of the architects who works in Oslo called.

The cousin of the architects who works in Oslo called.

Singular works shows that the cousin works in Oslo.

The cousin of the architects who work in Oslo called.

The cousin of the architects who work in Oslo called.

Plural work shows that the architects work in Oslo.

The founder of the studio which won the contract spoke first.

The founder of the studio which won the contract spoke first.

Which does not refer to the person in this pattern, so studio is the attachment point.

4. Adverbs and participial phrases

Only, nearly, often and almost can have different scope. Position and stress help identify it, but the nearest-word rule does not always work. A modifier between two possible targets is sometimes called a squinting modifier because it can be read in either direction.

In an ordinary initial participial phrase, the understood doer is the main-clause subject. If that interpretation is impossible, the modifier dangles. Fixed comments such as generally speaking have a different function. At the end of a sentence, some participial phrases allow several readings.

In the formula, S is the subject and V the verb. -ing represents a participial phrase, not literal text to insert.

How to build it

-ing phrase, S + V … → the -ing phrase attaches to S

subject / S
—
The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
verb / V
—
A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.
V-ing / -ing
—
The verb form ending in -ing: working, going. Its role depends on the construction.

Rita nearly lost all her savings.

Rita nearly lost all her savings.

Nearly has scope over losing all the savings: Rita came close to that complete loss. This does not necessarily mean she lost none of the money.

Rita lost nearly all her savings.

Rita lost nearly all her savings.

Nearly before all modifies the amount, making the scope clear.

Reading the letter, Pavlo spilled his tea.

Reading the letter, Pavlo spilled his tea.

The initial phrase attaches to the subject Pavlo, giving one intended reading.

5. How readers choose an interpretation

Readers combine word proximity with meaning and context. Writers already know their own intention and may overlook another reading. Name both possible attachment points and check whether each produces a meaningful message.

Ambiguity matters when different readings change an action or responsibility. Precise documents should make the intended relationship explicit. Deliberate ambiguity is also possible in literature, rhetoric and other genres, not only in jokes or headlines.

I'll talk to the engineer about the fault on Thursday.

I'll talk to the engineer about the fault on Thursday.

Thursday can be the day of the conversation or the day of the fault. Context often resolves this, but the wording poses a risk in a precise document.

The warden reminded the guests of the fire alarm in the corridor.

The warden reminded the guests of the fire alarm in the corridor.

The corridor can be the location of the reminder or the fire alarm.

6. Removing ambiguity

There are four main methods: move the modifier beside its intended target or to the sentence opening; replace the phrase with a relative clause or adjective; use a possessive construction; or split the sentence in two. The choice depends on the writer’s intended meaning, so establish the attachment first.

A comma does not resolve every ambiguity in every construction. Do not rely on punctuation alone. This rule concerns attachment specifically. Broader strategies for choosing a technique by genre, and structural ambiguity in general, belong to neighbouring rules.

How to build it

move · replace · use a possessive · split

Using a ladder, Oleh cleaned the gutter.

Using a ladder, Oleh cleaned the gutter.

The opening phrase attaches to the subject, making the ladder the instrument Oleh uses.

The tutor praised the pupil who had the sketchbook.

The tutor praised the pupil who had the sketchbook.

Who had the sketchbook directly describes pupil in this structure. The complete description explicitly identifies who had it.

7. Preserving clues across languages

Some languages mark relative words for gender and number, which can reveal their antecedent. English who has the same form in all these cases. Simply substituting who for a more strongly inflected relative word can therefore introduce ambiguity absent from the original.

Case endings and agreement in other languages can show relationships without relying on a fixed order. English often uses word order, possessive constructions and the choice of relative word to make those links clear. When translating, check whether a clue has been lost and make the intended attachment explicit if needed.

I met my friend's brother, who lives in Odesa.

I met my friend's brother, who lives in Odesa.

The possessive construction and the placement of the non-defining relative clause identify brother as its antecedent.

She saw the neighbour's children, who were playing in the yard.

She saw the neighbour's children, who were playing in the yard.

Plural who were shows that the children were playing.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:Having finished the exam, the bell rang.

Correct:When the exam was over, the bell rang.

The bell did not take or finish the exam. A time clause with its own subject, exam, removes the mismatch without inventing who took the exam.

Incorrect:The nurse gave a pill to the patient who were feeling dizzy.

Correct:The nurse gave a pill to the patient who was feeling dizzy.

Who refers to the singular patient, so use was feeling. Placing the relative clause beside patient makes the connection explicit.

Incorrect:On our walk, we saw a bear whose claws was enormous.

Correct:On our walk, we saw a bear whose claws were enormous.

The relative clause’s subject is plural claws, so use were. Whose links the claws to the bear.

Incorrect:He served the guests steaks that was still raw, on silver trays.

Correct:He served the guests steaks that were still raw, on silver trays.

That refers to plural steaks, so use were. The relative clause is placed beside the word it describes.

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How to Eliminate Ambiguity and Preserve the Intended Meaning

1. From Intention to Correction

Eliminating ambiguity does not simply mean noticing that a sentence can be read in two ways; it means securing the interpretation you intended. Therefore, you must first know your intention: what exactly you meant to communicate, and only then choose a method.

Here we consider four useful methods: punctuation, word order, added grammatical markers, and more precise vocabulary. There are other solutions too, such as dividing the text into sentences. Choose the simplest option that preserves the meaning and makes the intended connection clear.

Diagnosing and analyzing ambiguity belong to neighboring topics. What matters here is something else: choose a method, apply it, and reread the result.

How to build it

intention → easiest method → reread for new ambiguity

As the crew unloaded the cargo shifted.

While the crew was unloading, the cargo shifted.

Without a comma, cargo is read as the object of unloaded. The comma after unloaded closes the subordinate clause, and cargo becomes the subject: As the crew unloaded, the cargo shifted.

The vendor delivered the crates to the depot that had been damaged.

The vendor delivered the crates to the depot that had been damaged (or the damaged crates).

The phrase that had been damaged could refer to either crates or depot. If the crates were intended, place the adjective next to them: The vendor delivered the damaged crates to the depot.

2. Punctuation: Commas, Hyphens, and Lists

A comma after an introductory subordinate clause shows where the subordinate clause ends and the subject of the main clause begins. Without it, the first noun after the subordinate verb can easily be read as its object. At the same time, a comma is not placed between the subject and the predicate: such a comma merely breaks up the sentence.

Commas distinguish a non-defining relative clause from one that identifies a group. These are not necessarily opposite facts. Residents who live near the airport identifies residents by where they live, but by itself it does not prove that no other residents complained.

A hyphen can show that words form a single modifier: high-risk patient. A serial comma can clarify a list and distinguish it from an appositive, but it does not automatically eliminate every ambiguity. Check the entire list.

Residents who live near the airport complained.

The residents who live near the airport complained.

The relative clause identifies the group of residents who are said to have complained. The sentence does not say whether anyone else complained.

Residents, who live near the airport, complained.

The residents, who live near the airport, complained.

The relative clause adds a fact about the group of residents identified in the context. It does not state that all residents of any wider city live near the airport.

He invited the tutors, a chemist, and a poet.

He invited the tutors, a chemist, and a poet.

The comma before and completes a list of three groups. Without it, a chemist and a poet could be read as an appositive explaining tutors.

She treats a high-risk patient.

She treats a high-risk patient.

The hyphen establishes that high-risk is a single modifier of patient.

3. Word Order and Moving an Adverbial

Keeping a modifier close to the word it belongs to helps the reader, but it is not the only factor: structure and meaning also matter. Reordering is useful when it clearly separates the intended head from a competing one.

In an ordinary introductory participial phrase, the doer must correspond to the subject of the main clause. This applies to such a phrase, not to every introductory adverbial: Yesterday or In the archive does not name a doer.

Degree adverbs such as nearly and only are especially sensitive to position: when we move the word, we change what it scopes over. Therefore, always reread the sentence after reordering it.

The clause that limits liability was drafted by the lawyer.

The clause that limits liability was drafted by the lawyer.

The modifier is next to clause. If it were placed at the end, it could refer to lawyer.

Frowning at the screen, the technician rebooted the server.

Frowning at the screen, the technician rebooted the server.

The subject the technician is the one who is frowning, so the introductory phrase is attached correctly.

4. Function Words and Relative Clauses

Omitting that after verbs such as reported, admitted, and concluded makes the next noun look like an object. Restoring that opens a subordinate clause and removes the misleading reading immediately.

A relative word with an auxiliary verb (who was, that had been) expands a reduced clause and marks its boundaries. This removes a classic trap: a past-tense form that is initially read as the main predicate but is actually a passive participle.

Who usually refers to people, while which refers to things and organizations. In a standard non-defining relative clause set off by commas, that is not used. The choice of word helps, but when two people or things are possible referents, it does not guarantee clarity.

The pilot reported that the instrument had failed.

The pilot reported that the instrument had failed.

The word that immediately shows that instrument begins a new clause rather than being the object of reported.

The guests who were served late complained.

The guests who were served late complained.

Who were opens a relative clause, so served is not read as the main predicate.

The museum, which opened in 1990, attracts many visitors.

The museum, which opened in 1990, attracts many visitors.

In a non-defining clause after a comma, which is used. The British Council explicitly states that that is not used here.

5. More Precise Vocabulary and Pronouns

Some words are easy to confuse: biannual usually means “twice a year,” while biennial means “once every two years.” To avoid this risk, write twice a year or every two years. Nonplussed also has different dictionary uses, so a precise description of the reaction can sometimes be clearer.

Similarly, a pronoun that could refer to two people can be replaced with a noun phrase or the word the latter. Conjunctions with multiple meanings, such as while or since, should also be replaced with more precise options (whereas, ever since, because) when both meanings are plausible.

This is the most economical method when the problem lies in one word. It does not change the sentence structure or require punctuation.

The conference is held twice a year.

The conference is held twice a year.

The frequency is stated directly instead of using biannual.

When Mina phoned Dara, Dara was driving.

When Mina phoned Dara, Dara was driving.

Repeating the name instead of using she removes the question of who was driving.

Whereas he rested, she worked.

Whereas he rested, she worked.

Whereas expresses contrast only, whereas while could additionally mean simultaneity.

6. Choosing a Method and Checking the Result

If there are several possible corrections, choose one that is clear and precise. Concision is useful, but not at the expense of meaning: night flights may be more convenient than flights that operate at night, whereas another similar word may not convey the same duration of time.

A correction may leave another ambiguity or create a new one. Therefore, the final step is always rereading. Pronouns are especially tricky: adding another phrase with the same he to the sentence leaves the question of whom he refers to open.

If several interpretations remain, change the structure or repeat the necessary name. Direct speech is appropriate when the exact words are known or when it is clearly an invented teaching example. Do not turn a paraphrase into a supposedly verbatim quotation without a basis.

Pia told Quinn, "You have won the bid."

Pia told Quinn, “You have won the bid.”

In this invented dialogue, you is addressed to Quinn. In a real document, this direct quotation can be written only if the exact words are known.

Pia told Quinn that Quinn had won the bid.

Pia told Quinn that Quinn had won the bid.

Repeating the name is also unambiguous, though slightly heavier than direct speech.

7. Limits: Where Ambiguity Is Harmless or Intentional

Not every ambiguity needs to be eliminated. In jokes, headlines, and literature, it may be an intentional device, and in many sentences the alternative meaning is so unlikely that correcting it would only damage the style.

Therefore, the writer’s responsibility is to eliminate ambiguity where a reader’s mistake could cause a misunderstanding—that is, in instructions, contracts, and notices about deadlines, conditions, and responsibility. The rest can remain if the context clearly indicates the meaning.

This topic does not teach you to diagnose ambiguity or analyze a garden path: that is the work of neighboring rules. Here, we assume that the problem has already been noticed and learn how to eliminate it.

Council to debate parking ban.

Council to debate parking ban.

The headline is completely clear without correction because the context rules out other interpretations.

The landlord will refund the deposit if the repairs are not finished by 1 March.

The landlord will refund the deposit if the repairs are not finished by 1 March.

In a contract, the condition and deadline must be unambiguous: here, the condition concerns unfinished repairs, and the date is the deadline.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:Reading the clause carefully, the penalty seemed unfair.

Correct:Reading the clause carefully, I thought the penalty unfair.

The introductory phrase Reading the clause carefully is assigned to the subject of the main sentence, but the penalty cannot read a clause. The subject must be the doer of the action.

Incorrect:While the chef was cooking the soup boiled over.

Correct:While the chef was cooking, the soup boiled over.

Without a comma after the subordinate clause, the soup is read as the object of cooking. The comma marks the clause boundary.

Incorrect:The report, that she wrote overnight, was praised.

Correct:The report, which she wrote overnight, was praised.

In a non-defining clause after a comma, that is not used; which is required.

Incorrect:The students who failed the module, were advised to retake it.

Correct:The students who failed the module were advised to retake it.

A comma between the subject (with its restrictive clause) and the predicate breaks up the sentence.

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