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Formal Connectors

Furthermore, moreover and in addition formally add another point to an existing argument. Their meanings are similar, but logical connection, position and punctuation matter. The separate pattern in addition to + noun or -ing also needs attention.

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Adding information: Furthermore, Moreover and In addition

Establish the connection before choosing a connector

All three expressions signal addition. The second idea extends the same argument rather than contradicting the first or presenting its consequence. Before choosing a word, check whether “and one more fact” would naturally express the connection.

These connectors are especially useful in reports, essays, proposals and formal letters. And and also are grammatical in ordinary conversation; a different register does not make a sentence incorrect.

How to build it

first point + formal additive connector + additional point

The course includes weekly seminars. Furthermore, students receive individual feedback.

The course includes weekly seminars. Furthermore, students receive individual feedback.

The second fact adds another benefit of the course. It is neither a causal nor a contrastive connection.

The office is close to the station. In addition, it has secure bicycle parking.

The office is close to the station. In addition, it has secure bicycle parking.

In addition introduces a separate extra fact about the same subject.

Three similar tools, not three rigid rules

Furthermore, moreover and in addition are often interchangeable. Do not invent an absolute distinction in neutral formal writing when the context permits all three.

Moreover and furthermore can present the next point as even more important or persuasive. This is a pragmatic tendency, not a grammatical restriction: moreover need not always introduce the strongest argument.

How to build it

Furthermore / Moreover / In addition, + complete clause

clause
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A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.

The proposal is affordable. Moreover, it can be implemented within three months.

The proposal is affordable. Moreover, it can be implemented within three months.

Moreover appropriately strengthens the argument with another significant advantage.

The archive is searchable. Furthermore, every record includes a short summary.

The archive is searchable. Furthermore, every record includes a short summary.

Furthermore continues the list of features without claiming the second results from the first.

Punctuation between independent clauses

The clearest pattern is to end the first sentence with a full stop, begin the next with the connector and place a comma after it. This makes the logical connection immediately visible.

You can also join two independent clauses with a semicolon: The plan is practical; moreover, it is affordable. A comma alone before moreover, without a conjunction, cannot join two independent clauses and creates a comma splice.

How to build it

First clause. Moreover, second clause. OR: first clause; moreover, second clause.

clause
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A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.

The rooms are quiet. Furthermore, they have adjustable lighting.

The rooms are quiet. Furthermore, they have adjustable lighting.

A full stop ends the first sentence; a comma separates the initial connector in the second.

The rooms are quiet; moreover, they have adjustable lighting.

The rooms are quiet; moreover, they have adjustable lighting.

A semicolon correctly connects two closely related independent clauses.

Mid-sentence position and and

These connectors are not limited to the beginning of a new sentence. Moreover and furthermore can be parenthetical and set off by commas: The evidence, moreover, is publicly available.

They can also combine with and: The service is reliable and, furthermore, easy to use. Therefore “a connector must always follow a full stop or semicolon” is too broad. Distinguish grammatical coordination with and from a comma splice without a conjunction.

How to build it

subject, moreover, predicate; OR: and, furthermore, additional element

subject / S
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The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.

The evidence, moreover, is publicly available.

The evidence, moreover, is publicly available.

Parenthetical moreover is set off on both sides.

The tool is accurate and, furthermore, easy to maintain.

The tool is accurate and, furthermore, easy to maintain.

And coordinates two qualities; furthermore additionally signals a cumulative argument.

In addition and In addition to

In addition, followed by a comma is a connector for a complete following clause: In addition, the team offers support. It is followed by a subject and verb.

In addition to is a prepositional expression. After to, use a noun, pronoun or -ing form: in addition to the salary, in addition to this, in addition to working remotely. Here to is a preposition, so in addition to work remotely does not fit.

How to build it

In addition, + complete clause; In addition to + noun, pronoun or -ing form

V-ing / -ing
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The verb form ending in -ing: working, going. Its role depends on the construction.
noun
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A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.
clause
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A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.
pronoun
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A word used instead of naming a person or thing: I, you, she, it, they.

In addition, the package includes technical support.

In addition, the package includes technical support.

A complete clause with subject the package begins after the comma.

In addition to including technical support, the package provides regular updates.

In addition to including technical support, the package provides regular updates.

Prepositional to is followed by the -ing form including.

Using the patterns in your own writing

In a strong paragraph, a connector cannot replace logic. State the main point first, then add a genuinely separate piece of evidence, benefit or characteristic. Do not use an additive connector when the second part actually expresses a result or contrast.

Do not overload every sentence with furthermore or moreover. Vary connections to suit register and structure: and, also, another advantage or in addition to may be more natural. Aim for a clear sequence of ideas, not the greatest possible number of formal words.

How to build it

main point → additional relevant point → explanation or example

The new rota gives staff more predictable hours. In addition, it makes shift exchanges easier.

The new rota gives staff more predictable hours. In addition, it makes shift exchanges easier.

Both sentences support the same positive assessment of the rota with different facts.

In addition to reducing paperwork, the system gives managers a clearer overview of pending requests.

In addition to reducing paperwork, the system gives managers a clearer overview of pending requests.

One construction concisely combines two independent benefits of the system.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:The rent is reasonable, moreover the rooms are spacious.

Correct:The rent is reasonable. Moreover, the rooms are spacious.

A comma alone cannot join two independent clauses. A full stop removes the comma splice, and initial moreover takes a following comma.

Incorrect:Furthermore the report includes a detailed budget.

Correct:Furthermore, the report includes a detailed budget.

Separate initial furthermore from the following clause with a comma.

Incorrect:In addition to the office is central, it has secure parking.

Correct:In addition to being central, the office has secure parking.

Do not put the finite clause the office is central directly after prepositional to. Use being central or restructure the sentence.

Incorrect:The evidence moreover, is publicly available.

Correct:The evidence, moreover, is publicly available.

Set off parenthetical moreover within the sentence with commas on both sides.

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Formal Result Links: consequently, thus, hence, accordingly

One Function, Several Appropriate Forms

Consequently, thus, hence, and accordingly can show that the next idea follows from the previous one. They help the reader see the relationship “reason or basis → result or conclusion.”

These words are often interchangeable in a neutral result context. If a sentence is equally natural with several connectors, do not invent one single correct answer: the choice depends on emphasis, rhythm, and genre.

Compared with so, these connectors are more typical of prepared, business, and academic writing. This is a register tendency, not a scale from “stronger” to “weaker,” and not a ban on using them in speech.

How to build it

basis or reason → formal connector → consequence, conclusion, or appropriate action

Access was restricted. Consequently, attendance fell.

Access was restricted. As a result, attendance fell.

Consequently directly marks the factual consequence of the restriction.

The sample was small; thus, the estimate remains uncertain.

The sample was small; therefore, the estimate remains uncertain.

Thus presents a logical conclusion from the previous fact.

The route was blocked. Hence, we took the northern road.

The route was blocked. Therefore, we took the northern road.

In this context, hence, thus, consequently, or accordingly could express the same basic relationship.

Consequently and accordingly: consequence and response

Consequently is most transparently understood as “as a result”: the first event caused the second or created the conditions for it. It can stand at the beginning of a new sentence, after a semicolon, or inside a sentence after and.

Accordingly can also mean “therefore / as a result,” but it often emphasizes an action adapted to the circumstances. In plan accordingly, act accordingly, or adjust accordingly, the word means “in response to the situation,” rather than simply linking two sentences.

When the consequence and the appropriate response coincide, both words can be natural. Choose consequently to emphasize the consequence, and accordingly when it matters that the action was adapted to the circumstances.

Costs rose, and consequently prices increased.

Costs rose, and consequently prices increased.

Consequently identifies the second fact as the consequence of the first; and grammatically joins the parts.

The venue changed. Accordingly, we updated the map.

The venue changed. Accordingly, we updated the map.

Updating the map is a logical and appropriate response to the new circumstances.

Please read the new procedure and act accordingly.

Please read the new procedure and act accordingly.

Here accordingly describes the manner of acting in line with the instructions; it does not introduce a separate result.

Thus: “therefore” and “in this way”

Thus has at least two important meanings. As a result connector, it means “therefore / as a result”; as an adverb of manner, it means “in this way.” The meaning is determined not by the word’s position alone but by the meaning of the whole sentence.

After and thus, a verb or another part of the same sentence often follows: and thus reduce costs. The comma + thus + -ing construction briefly names the result of the previous action: thus reducing costs.

In these patterns, thus does not create a new independent clause. That is why they do not follow the mechanical rule “there must always be a full stop or semicolon before thus.”

The evidence is incomplete. Thus, no firm conclusion is possible.

The evidence is incomplete. Thus, no firm conclusion is possible.

Thus introduces a logical conclusion in a new sentence.

The filter removes noise and thus improves accuracy.

The filter removes noise and thus improves accuracy.

And joins two predicates with one subject; thus clarifies the result.

The update removed two steps, thus saving time.

The update removed two steps, thus saving time.

Thus + -ing presents saving time as the result of the previous action.

The instruction was phrased thus: “Save a copy first.”

The instruction was phrased thus: “Save a copy first.”

Thus means “in this way” and does not express a cause-and-effect relationship.

Hence: conclusion, noun phrase, and future time

In its result meaning, hence means “for this reason / therefore.” It can introduce a full clause, but it also very naturally comes before a noun phrase: hence the delay, hence its name, hence our concern.

In the comma + hence + noun phrase pattern, there is no second independent clause after the comma, so this is not a comma splice. This concise form is especially typical for explaining a name, decision, concern, or another obvious consequence.

A separate meaning of hence is “from now, after a certain period”: three months hence. This is a time expression, not a result connector; it must not be confused with ago.

The road was closed, hence the delay.

The road was closed, hence the delay.

After hence comes the noun phrase the delay, not a new full sentence.

The firm is called Northstar, hence the star in its logo.

The firm is called Northstar, hence the star in its logo.

Hence briefly explains a feature through the fact stated previously.

The next review will take place six months hence.

The next review will take place six months hence.

Temporal hence counts a period forward from the present moment.

Sentence boundaries and punctuation

When a connector stands between two independent clauses without a coordinating conjunction, the safe basic patterns are a full stop or a semicolon: Cause. Consequently, result. / Cause; consequently, result. A comma alone cannot join two independent clauses.

These are not the only correct patterns. The coordinator and can provide the grammatical link: Cause, and consequently result. A comma is also natural before an incomplete result phrase: hence + noun phrase or thus + -ing.

After an initial consequently, accordingly, thus, or hence in a separate sentence, a comma helps set off the transition. Inside a sentence, punctuation depends on the structure, not on the word itself.

How to build it

Cause. Consequently, result. Or: cause; consequently, result. Also: cause, and consequently + result; cause, hence + noun phrase; action, thus + -ing form.

V-ing / -ing
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The verb form ending in -ing: working, going. Its role depends on the construction.
NP / noun phrase
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A noun phrase: a noun with its dependent words, such as the new student; the pattern treats it as one group of words.
noun
—
A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.

The server failed. Consequently, the backup started.

The server failed. As a result, the backup started.

Two full sentences are separated by a full stop.

The server failed; consequently, the backup started.

The server failed; consequently, the backup started.

A semicolon joins closely related independent clauses.

The server failed, and consequently the backup started.

The server failed, and consequently the backup started.

And grammatically joins two independent clauses; consequently marks the relationship.

The server failed, thus triggering the alarm.

The server failed, thus triggering the alarm.

Thus triggering is a result -ing phrase, not a second independent clause.

Connector position and focus

At the beginning of a sentence, the connector clearly organizes the transition between two statements. Inside a sentence, it may stand before the main verb, after an auxiliary verb, or next to the part it logically links.

Position changes the rhythm and focus, but it does not automatically create a difference in truth. Do not reject a natural sentence simply because the writer chose a medial rather than an initial position.

In your own writing, you can change the connector’s position if the relationship remains clear. An initial position clearly marks the transition, while a medial position often makes the sentence more compact.

The terms changed, and we consequently revised the contract.

The terms changed, and we consequently revised the contract.

Consequently stands before the main verb revised.

The terms changed. Consequently, we revised the contract.

The terms changed. Consequently, we revised the contract.

An initial position marks the boundary between the statements more strongly.

The plan has accordingly been updated.

The plan has accordingly been updated.

Accordingly stands after the first auxiliary verb and before been.

Logic, register, and the writer’s responsibility

A connector shows the relationship claimed by the writer, but it does not prove that relationship. A sequence of events is not by itself causation: before using consequently or thus, check whether the second idea really follows from the first.

In formal writing, you can soften a conclusion with may, appears, or is likely to. This is especially useful when the data support a probable rather than inevitable result.

For addition, use moreover, furthermore, or in addition; for contrast, use however, nevertheless, or by contrast. A grammatically correct connector for another relationship may be appropriate in a different context, but it does not clearly fulfill the goal “show a result.”

All three tests found the same defect. Thus, the issue appears systemic.

All three tests found the same defect. Thus, the issue appears systemic.

Appears does not turn limited data into unconditional certainty.

The first report was late. Moreover, two figures were missing.

The first report was late. Moreover, two figures were missing.

Moreover adds a fact; it does not identify the missing figures as a consequence of the delay.

The first report was late. Consequently, the meeting started without it.

The first report was late. Consequently, the meeting started without it.

Here the second fact is directly explained by the first, so a result connector is appropriate.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:The sample was contaminated, consequently, the results were discarded.

Correct:The sample was contaminated; consequently, the results were discarded.

Two independent clauses cannot be joined with a comma alone; a semicolon creates a correct boundary.

Incorrect:The evidence was incomplete. Thus, requiring another test.

Correct:The evidence was incomplete. Thus, another test was required.

A full sentence is required after a full stop; thus requiring creates only a fragment without a subject and a finite verb.

Incorrect:The system overheated. Hence, shut down automatically.

Correct:The system overheated and hence shut down automatically.

To state that the system itself shut down, use it shut down or join the predicates with and. Without a subject, shut down can be read as a command, which does not convey the intended meaning.

Incorrect:The next audit is three months hence ago.

Correct:The next audit is three months hence.

Temporal hence already means counting forward from the present; ago points in the opposite direction and cannot be combined with it.

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Contrast: On the other hand, Conversely, By contrast · B2

Identify the relationship before choosing the connector

On the other hand, conversely and by contrast do more than decorate a text: each shows how the second point relates to the first. First decide whether you are presenting another side of an issue, a reverse relationship or a direct comparison between two cases.

Contrast does not require the second point to be an absolute opposite. A decision often involves two different considerations pulling the conclusion in different directions. On the other hand is natural here.

Other connectors, including and, but and however, can also create a grammatical contrast in context. This topic teaches more precise discourse signals; a different grammatical construction is not an error simply because it does not meet an explicitly requested target.

How to build it

Point A. Connector, + point B.

The city centre is lively. On the other hand, rent is high.

The city centre is lively. On the other hand, rent is high.

The second point adds an important disadvantage to the first advantage; both can be true at the same time.

Demand rose in June. Conversely, waiting times fell.

Demand rose in June. Conversely, waiting times fell.

The second change moves in the opposite direction to the first, giving conversely a clear meaning.

The old process required five forms. By contrast, the new one requires only one.

The old process required five forms. By contrast, the new one requires only one.

The two processes are placed side by side, with their difference deliberately highlighted.

On the other hand: another side of the same issue

On the other hand presents another side of a decision, evaluation or situation. It may introduce a counterargument, a disadvantage after an advantage, or another fact that changes the overall picture.

The full pair on the one hand … on the other hand is useful for explicitly balanced arguments. However, on the other hand often appears alone after the first side has already been stated; there is no need to add on the one hand retrospectively.

If the second part merely adds another advantage pointing in the same direction, moreover or in addition is usually more precise. Still, the connector itself does not make the sentence ungrammatical: assess the visible context and meaning.

How to build it

(On the one hand,) A. On the other hand, B.

The course is intensive. On the other hand, it finishes in only six weeks.

The course is intensive. On the other hand, it finishes in only six weeks.

The short duration presents another side of the intensive workload and may change the learner’s decision.

On the one hand, the office is close to home. On the other hand, it has no quiet rooms.

On the one hand, the office is close to home. On the other hand, it has no quiet rooms.

The paired form presents the two considerations symmetrically.

Maya works from home. Leo, on the other hand, works at the office.

Maya works from home. Leo, on the other hand, works at the office.

The connector can appear inside the second clause, set off by commas.

Conversely: a genuinely reverse perspective

Conversely means “in the reverse way” or “viewed from the opposite direction.” It is especially precise when directions, roles or conditions are reversed: more ↔ less, stricter ↔ more lenient, or A affects B ↔ B affects A.

Do not use conversely as a universal replacement for however. A minor disadvantage after an advantage does not yet establish a reverse relationship; on the other hand is usually more natural there.

Conversely is an adverbial connector, not a preposition. Do not follow it with a noun phrase using conversely to. It introduces a complete point or occupies a parenthetical position within it.

How to build it

A changes in one direction. Conversely, B changes in the opposite direction.

When the screen is brighter, battery use rises. Conversely, dimming it reduces power use.

When the screen is brighter, battery use rises. Conversely, dimming it reduces power use.

The second part reverses the same relationship.

Senior staff can mentor new colleagues; conversely, new colleagues can introduce fresh tools.

Senior staff can mentor new colleagues; conversely, new colleagues can introduce fresh tools.

The roles are reversed in terms of who contributes to whom, making conversely appropriate.

The hall is spacious. On the other hand, it has no windows.

The hall is spacious. On the other hand, it has no windows.

This is an advantage and a disadvantage, not a reverse relationship; conversely would signal too strong a connection here.

By contrast: highlighting a difference through direct comparison

By contrast explicitly places two people, places, periods, methods or measures side by side and highlights their difference. It directs readers towards comparison more strongly than merely adding another side.

By contrast is less common than in contrast. As a link between sentences, it can stand alone: By contrast, + a complete point. Before a named comparison target, the standard pattern is by contrast with, not by contrast to.

In contrast to is a normal form, but it uses a different opening. Do not transfer to from in contrast to into by contrast.

How to build it

A. By contrast, B. / By contrast with + noun phrase, B.

NP / noun phrase
—
A noun phrase: a noun with its dependent words, such as the new student; the pattern treats it as one group of words.
noun
—
A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.

The north office is quiet. By contrast, the city office is busy all day.

The north office is quiet. By contrast, the city office is busy all day.

The two offices are compared on the same dimension.

By contrast with the old process, the new one has a single approval stage.

By contrast with the old process, the new one has a single approval stage.

Standard with follows by contrast before the named comparison target.

The first team answered in two hours. In contrast, the second took a full day.

The first team answered in two hours. In contrast, the second took a full day.

In contrast is a more frequent related form; its existence does not make by contrast incorrect.

Sentences, semicolons and commas

To begin a new sentence, put a full stop after the first point, capitalise the connector and follow it with a comma: Point A. By contrast, point B.

A semicolon can also link two independent clauses: Point A; conversely, point B. Do not join two complete clauses with a comma alone; that is a comma splice.

When on the other hand appears parenthetically inside the second clause, it is normally enclosed in two commas. Make sure those commas do not obscure the boundary between independent clauses.

How to build it

First clause. Connector, second clause. Or: first clause; connector, second clause. Inside a clause: subject, connector, predicate.

subject / S
—
The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
clause
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A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.

The basic plan is cheap; on the other hand, it includes no support.

The basic plan is cheap; on the other hand, it includes no support.

The semicolon correctly links two independent clauses.

Costs fell. Conversely, revenue rose.

Costs fell. Conversely, revenue rose.

A comma follows the opening conversely.

Mina prefers email, but Sam prefers calls.

Mina prefers email, but Sam prefers calls.

But is a grammatical conjunction alternative; it does not require a full stop before it.

By contrast or on the contrary?

By contrast compares two different things or situations. On the contrary denies or corrects a preceding assertion: the speaker says that it is untrue and the opposite is true.

If Rory arrives on time and Vicki is late, you are comparing two people: by contrast. If someone assumes an event was terrible but you actually enjoyed it, you are correcting that assumption: on the contrary.

On the other hand does not deny the first point either: both sides may be true. This is the key check: “Am I adding another perspective, or saying the previous statement is false?”

How to build it

comparison: A. By contrast, B. / correction: Not A. On the contrary, B.

Rory is always on time. By contrast, Vicki is often late.

Rory is always on time. By contrast, Vicki is often late.

We compare two people rather than correct the assertion about Rory.

It wasn't a dull lecture. On the contrary, it was fascinating.

It wasn't a dull lecture. On the contrary, it was fascinating.

The second part directly replaces the rejected evaluation with its opposite.

The role pays well. On the other hand, it involves frequent travel.

The role pays well. On the other hand, it involves frequent travel.

Both facts are true; the second merely adds another side to the decision.

Using the connectors in reports, discussion and your own writing

In a report, by contrast helps compare measures or groups; conversely describes opposite trends; on the other hand balances a recommendation. In every case, the connector must fit the facts rather than a desire to sound formal.

Before writing, ask what the second part actually does. If it changes the angle of evaluation, use on the other hand; if it reverses the relationship, use conversely; if it places two items side by side, use by contrast.

After writing, check three things: both parts are understandable without invented assumptions, punctuation marks the sentence boundary, and the connector does not overstate the contrast.

How to build it

identify the relationship → choose the connector → check the boundary and comma

The cheaper option reduces costs. On the other hand, it may require more staff time.

The cheaper option reduces costs. On the other hand, it may require more staff time.

The connector balances a practical recommendation.

Higher occupancy raises energy use. Conversely, lower occupancy reduces it.

Higher occupancy raises energy use. Conversely, lower occupancy reduces it.

One relationship is described in two opposite directions.

The weekday service stops at ten. By contrast, the weekend service runs all night.

The weekday service stops at ten. By contrast, the weekend service runs all night.

The two service patterns are compared by operating hours.

Common mistakes

Incorrect:Online meetings save travel time, on the other hand they can feel impersonal.

Correct:Online meetings save travel time. On the other hand, they can feel impersonal.

Do not link two independent clauses with a comma alone; a comma is also needed after the opening connector.

Incorrect:By contrast to the old process, the new one needs only one approval.

Correct:By contrast with the old process, the new one needs only one approval.

After by contrast, standard usage puts with rather than to before a named comparison target.

Incorrect:Costs fell. Conversely revenue rose.

Correct:Costs fell. Conversely, revenue rose.

Set off the initial adverbial connector conversely with a comma.

Incorrect:Conversely to the first team, the second team finished early.

Correct:By contrast with the first team, the second team finished early.

Conversely does not govern a noun phrase with to; this direct comparison requires by contrast with.

Incorrect:It was not a dull lecture. On contrary, it was fascinating.

Correct:It was not a dull lecture. On the contrary, it was fascinating.

The article the is required in the fixed expression on the contrary.

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