First person versus impersonal forms
1. Whose conclusion is it? Voice assigns responsibility
Compare two ways of presenting a view about the same indices. The first explicitly identifies who holds the position. The second leaves that person unnamed and uses can to present the position as one that can be defended. The main topic is the same, but the complete messages are not identical.
I alone does not make a conclusion more truthful, and removing it does not automatically make a text objective. However, the complete frame — I argue, it can be argued, the data show — affects both attribution and certainty. Consider these two questions separately.
Here, first person means constructions with I or we that identify the writer within the sentence. An impersonal frame leaves the writer unnamed: dummy it with a passive, a passive without a by-phrase, or an inanimate subject such as the data or this article.
I argue that the two indices reward different behaviour.
I argue that the two indices reward different behaviour.
The writer is named and takes responsibility for the claim. Any challenge is directed at that writer's argument.
It can be argued that the two indices reward different behaviour.
It can be argued that the two indices reward different behaviour.
The writer is unnamed. Can adds the idea that this position can be defended. The reader can still challenge the conclusion itself.
The two indices reward different behaviour.
The two indices reward different behaviour.
There is no explicit voice frame here. This illustrates the rule's scope: it concerns choices about whether to name the writer within such a frame.
2. A range of impersonal frames
Impersonality is expressed through several constructions, not just one. They distance the reader from the writer in different ways.
Dummy it with a passive, as in it has been suggested that… or it is often assumed that…, allows the person expressing the view to remain unnamed. Present Perfect connects an earlier act with the present; Present Simple presents a current or habitual situation. Tense alone does not establish whether the view belongs to this writer or earlier work.
A subject-raising construction moves the logical subject to the front. Instead of a frame beginning with dummy it, that subject comes first and is followed by a to-infinitive construction. British Council LearnEnglish presents these two patterns as alternatives with verbs such as believe, estimate and think.
An inanimate agent, as in the data show, the figures point to or this article proposes, replaces the human actor with a text or body of material rather than removing the actor altogether. This is a relatively mild form of impersonality: responsibility remains, but is assigned to the work rather than the person.
In existential frames such as there are grounds for… and there is a case for…, be is followed by a noun phrase, and for introduces its continuation. Do not use this as a replacement pattern for it is argued that…. In other constructions, a noun after there can take a that-clause: there is evidence that….
it + be + V3 + that-clause | logical subject + be + V3 + to-infinitive | inanimate subject + active verb | there + be + noun + for/against
- subject / S —
- The grammatical subject: who or what the clause is about; the verb agrees with it. In The book was written, the book is the subject, although someone else does the action.
- verb / V —
- A word for an action or state, such as work or be. The pattern determines its form.
- V3 / past participle —
- The third verb form: worked, gone, seen. Used after have/has or in the passive, for example; it is not always the same as V2.
- noun —
- A word naming a person, thing or idea: student, book, happiness.
- clause —
- A construction with a verb, often with its own subject: when I arrived. A non-finite clause may leave the subject unspoken: to get home.
- infinitive —
- The base verb form. With to: to work; without to: work. The pattern determines whether to is needed.
It has been suggested that the two shifts overlap by design.
It has been suggested that the two shifts overlap by design.
Present Perfect shows that the suggestion has already been made and remains relevant. Context must establish who made it.
The overlap is thought to be deliberate.
The overlap is thought to be deliberate.
The logical subject has moved to the front. The person holding the view is still unnamed.
The rota shows that the overlap is deliberate.
The rota shows that the overlap is deliberate.
The document supplies the basis for the conclusion. The writer remains invisible, but the conclusion now explicitly rests on something.
There are grounds for treating the overlap as deliberate.
There are grounds for treating the overlap as deliberate.
Here, grounds takes for + -ing. This is a requirement of the particular expression, not a ban on all that-clauses after there.
3. The verb matters more than the pronoun
The presence of I alone does not make the sentence an explicit argumentative claim. The verb determines the writer's action.
Argumentative verbs such as argue, contend, maintain, hold, propose, show, demonstrate and take X to be Y name an action the writer performs in the text. They invite challenge: an opponent can show why the argument fails.
Expressions of impression, such as feel, sense and have the impression, present an idea as personal perception and often soften it. The claim can still be discussed or challenged. However, appealing to an impression does not replace evidence in an academic argument.
In the natural sciences, first person can describe intellectual actions and concrete procedures: we hypothesised, we measured. A passive is often useful when attention belongs on the sample or procedure, but it is not compulsory for practical operations. Consider the genre and the publication's requirements.
We hypothesised that the coating would slow corrosion.
We hypothesised that the coating would slow corrosion.
This names an intellectual action. First person can be appropriate even in a natural-science article.
The samples were wiped with acetone before each run.
The samples were wiped with acetone before each run.
This describes a practical operation. The identity of the person wiping the samples is unimportant to the conclusion, so the passive is useful.
I hold that the second reading fits the archive better.
I hold that the second reading fits the archive better.
Hold identifies a position the writer is prepared to defend.
I have the impression that the second reading fits the archive better.
I have the impression that the second reading fits the archive better.
The interpretation is presented as a preliminary impression. Readers may challenge it or ask what evidence supports it.
4. First person does not necessarily mean a personal tone
A common misconception at this level is that I makes writing emotional while impersonal language automatically makes it restrained. Duke Writing Studio shows otherwise: first-person writing can be entirely clinical, while writing without any personal pronouns can be openly evaluative.
Tone comes from vocabulary, evaluative expressions and sentence construction. The pronoun simply indicates whether the writer is named. Advice to remove I to sound more objective often fails: the evaluation remains while its source disappears.
For C2 writing, check tone and voice separately. A sentence may be excessively emotional without containing a single personal pronoun, and a first-person sentence may be restrained.
I recorded the discharge time for each patient and compared the three winters.
I recorded the discharge time for each patient and compared the three winters.
The sentence uses first person but has a factual tone: it describes a procedure rather than an attitude.
The ward simply cannot absorb another winter like the last one.
The ward simply cannot absorb another winter like the last one.
There is no personal pronoun, yet the writer's stance is clear.
5. Who does we mean?
In English academic writing, we can have at least three meanings. The verb helps readers distinguish them.
Exclusive we can mean the authors of the work: we collected, we argue. If there is only one author, I clearly identifies an individual action. Some disciplines also use authorial we for a single author. Check the publication's requirements and avoid suggesting research collaborators who did not exist.
Inclusive we guides the reader through the text. It says nothing about the number of authors and can be appropriate in a single-author work.
General-human we, as in we tend to underestimate risk, refers to people in general. Difficulty arises when these three uses appear together and readers can no longer tell who is meant.
The workaround the present author formally removes the pronoun but does not remove the writer. Readers still identify the same person, only through an extra interpretive step.
We coded the interviews independently and then compared the results.
We coded the interviews independently and then compared the results.
Exclusive we: the authors of the work actually performed this action.
We now leave the survey data aside and turn to the interviews.
We now leave the survey data aside and turn to the interviews.
Inclusive we guides the reader rather than stating how many authors there are.
The present author regards the distinction as unnecessary.
The present author regards the distinction as unnecessary.
The pronoun is absent, but the writer remains. Readers take an extra step to identify the person, making the sentence heavier.
6. What does impersonal language conceal?
Each impersonal frame conceals something. It is useful to identify exactly what.
A frame with decided hides the decision-maker. This is often harmless in a methods section, but may matter greatly in an accountability report.
A frame with claimed hides whose claim is being reported: this writer's or an earlier author's. If readers cannot identify the agent from context or a citation, the frame becomes a weakness rather than a useful stylistic choice.
The UNC Writing Center describes the other side of the problem: avoiding I at all costs often produces awkward constructions and obscures who did what.
A practical test is to ask 'by whom?' after the verb. If the answer matters to readers and the text does not supply it, use first person or name the agent.
It was decided to shorten the pilot by a month.
It was decided to shorten the pilot by a month.
Who decided: the writer, a manager or a committee? The sentence does not answer.
The steering group shortened the pilot by a month.
The steering group shortened the pilot by a month.
Naming the agent makes responsibility for the shortened pilot clear: readers now know with whom to discuss the decision.
It has been claimed that the two registers are converging.
It has been claimed that the two registers are converging.
It is unclear whether this is the writer's position or a report of previous research. Without a reference, readers cannot verify either interpretation.
7. Choosing a voice in your own writing
Choose a voice for each communicative purpose. A research article may use an impersonal description of methods and a first-person conclusion, but other appropriate combinations are possible. This is not a fixed grammatical requirement.
Discipline, section, genre and editorial requirements affect the choice. The UNC Writing Center describes different conventions in the natural sciences, social sciences and humanities. Duke Writing Studio notes that even in natural-science papers, first person occurs more often in abstracts, introductions and discussions than in methods sections.
A change of voice should be clear. Moving from passive to first person within one sentence is grammatically possible. It causes difficulty only when it obscures authorship or shifts attention unnecessarily.
Finally, check whether the chosen voice changes the content. If it does, the choice is more than stylistic. Moving from a named agent to an impersonal frame removes information, not just a presentational feature.
Two hundred entries were checked against the paper register. I treat the four mismatches as clerical rather than substantive.
Two hundred entries were checked against the paper register. I treat the four mismatches as clerical rather than substantive.
The method is impersonal; the assessment of the mismatches uses first person. Voice changes with the communicative purpose rather than halfway through it.
It is shown in this paper that the two curves diverge, and I explain why.
It is shown in this paper that the two curves diverge, and I explain why.
The passive and first person are combined grammatically. Check whether readers need the distinction between the paper's finding and the writer's personal explanation. If not, a more consistent presentation is possible.
The reviewer asked who chose the window, and I have added my name to that sentence.
The reviewer asked who chose the window, and I have added my name to that sentence.
When the question specifically concerns the agent, an impersonal frame can no longer supply the needed answer.
Common mistakes
Incorrect:It can be argue that the pilot scheme reduced waiting times.
Correct:It can be argued that the pilot scheme reduced waiting times.
The dummy-it frame requires the past participle argued after can be. Base-form argue leaves the construction ungrammatical even though its intended meaning is understandable.
Incorrect:In this paper I argues that the metric rewards volume over accuracy.
Correct:In this paper I argue that the metric rewards volume over accuracy.
First-person singular I does not take -s on the verb. This mistake can occur while changing voice if the writer carries over the verb form previously used with this paper.
Incorrect:The findings suggests that the intervention worked only in the first term.
Correct:The findings suggest that the intervention worked only in the first term.
When the material becomes the source of the conclusion, agreement still matters: plural findings takes suggest without -s.
Incorrect:The results are indicated that the effect fades after six months.
Correct:The results indicate that the effect fades after six months.
The passive of indicate does not take a that-clause with this subject in this pattern. To present the results as the basis for the conclusion, use the active verb.
Incorrect:There is argued that the reform was premature.
Correct:It can be argued that the reform was premature.
The reporting passive it can be argued that… needs dummy subject it. There is argued that… does not form this pattern. Other constructions can have a that-clause after a noun: there is evidence that….
Incorrect:It is widely assumed the museum's late openings to be profitable.
Correct:The museum's late openings are widely assumed to be profitable.
Two patterns have been mixed. The dummy-it pattern takes a finite that-clause; for the to-infinitive pattern, move the logical subject to the front.
Sources
- UNC Writing Center — Should I Use “I”? (first person in academic writing, disciplinary conventions and the consequences of avoiding I)
- Duke University Thompson Writing Program / Writing Studio — The First Person in Academic Writing (PDF, pp. 1–4: the history of restrictions, separating first person from personal tone, and intellectual actions in the sciences)
- British Council LearnEnglish, C1 — Advanced passives review (dummy it and subject-raising patterns with believe/estimate/think; naming the agent when needed)
- British Council LearnEnglish — Active and passive voice (introducing an agent with by when the writer wishes to identify it)
- Cambridge English Grammar Today — Hedges